ABull 128 Posted April 8, 2021 (edited) MTCA Edited May 16, 2021 by ABull 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ABull 128 Posted April 12, 2021 “Society is invincible—to a certain degree. But your real life is your own, and nothing can touch it. There is no power on earth that can prevent your criticizing and despising mediocrity—nothing that can stop you retreating into splendour and beauty—into the thoughts and beliefs that make the real life—the real you.” ― E M Forster, Where Angels Fear to Tread Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ruralrocker2010 21 Posted April 12, 2021 You like Roy Orbison...my bet! 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ruralrocker2010 21 Posted April 12, 2021 And i like the chorus, a lot. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
freddy j 621 Posted April 13, 2021 Love the retro feel to this song. I really enjoyed the story being told by the lyrics. Well done Allan!! 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bajan Blue 1,098 Posted April 14, 2021 definitely a retro vibe indeed - clever lyrics Cool Nigel 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ABull 128 Posted April 17, 2021 Hey mates, thanks for all of the listens & comments -- glad you like the song -- :) -- Allan. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ABull 128 Posted April 19, 2021 (edited) oh say... Edited May 1, 2021 by ABull Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Douglas Kirby 791 Posted April 21, 2021 It's a cool song and you did a top-notch job on the vocal - my only crit is the drum track - it's not quite in the groove at times, especially in the beginning of the song. But I know, programming drums can be difficult. Nice job overall. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Paul Bush 294 Posted April 23, 2021 I just love your melodies , harmonies , and well the text is just a bit quirky and thats good . great original song cheers 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ABull 128 Posted April 27, 2021 On 4/21/2021 at 4:03 PM, Douglas Kirby said: It's a cool song and you did a top-notch job on the vocal - my only crit is the drum track - it's not quite in the groove at times, especially in the beginning of the song. But I know, programming drums can be difficult. Nice job overall. Hey Douglas, thanks for listening and those specific comments -- I agree with you about the drums so I remixed it -- thank you for your ears, mate! -- Allan. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ABull 128 Posted May 1, 2021 On 4/13/2021 at 11:02 AM, freddy j said: Love the retro feel to this song. I really enjoyed the story being told by the lyrics. Well done Allan!! Thanks much Freddy -- glad ya like it -- :) -- Allan. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hidden Symmetry 1,484 Posted May 3, 2021 Enjoyed it, has that 60's vibe & classic songwriting style. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ABull 128 Posted May 7, 2021 On 4/23/2021 at 4:30 PM, Paul Bush said: I just love your melodies , harmonies , and well the text is just a bit quirky and thats good . great original song cheers Thanks Paul -- coming from you that's quite the compliment -- Allan. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Paul Bush 294 Posted May 8, 2021 17 hours ago, ABull said: Thanks Paul -- coming from you that's quite the compliment -- Allan. Hi Allan , I know how difficult it is to write songs I really struggle at times where I just hit a brick wall and more often than not, file it for another day, or persivere and thatsjust bloody painfull so I can appriciate the work you put into your songs I just dont have the guts to be quirky or original and have enough self confidence to be so I aim at the middle of the road way too often and that`s not what music is all about ...keep doing what youre doing and i´ll keep listening ..cheers Paul Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
