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kevinburns0423

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Vocal sounds little thin here on the Adam's? In fact the whole mix feels like it has had the middle scooped out, sorry to say. 

It sounds like you have worked hard on the songwriting and the playing sounds quite accomplished. 

Very abrupt end.

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Lot's going on there, I like the busy bass and guitars, pretty funky. I agree with wookie it sounds thin and lacks punch. Needs the bass turned up, maybe the drums too, not sure how to fix it, but you did some cool stuff on it for sure.

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Good song, good lyrics, couldn't help but think of Joy Division's Isolation, very different of course. Very proficient playing wow. As for the mix, I would turn down the funky guitar, the secondary vocal lines, turn up the drums and find something low or low-mid backgroundy and sustained that could give it some glue. Maybe a little less fx on the vocals, they seem to float above the busy song. Something gluey could bring it all together. I'm not a jazz person, just my impressions. 

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