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That was a catchy tune - I liked it.  That lead guitar tone was unusual, and it worked well. The chorus was a good hook. The mix sounded good to me.

Good lead vocal and bgvs - sounded cool to me.

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What a great tune!!!  The melody really pulls one in to the song and your vocal performance is excellent, as are the BGV's.

Excellent song Allan!

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On 3/24/2019 at 9:23 AM, Douglas Kirby said:

That was a catchy tune - I liked it.  That lead guitar tone was unusual, and it worked well. The chorus was a good hook. The mix sounded good to me.

Good lead vocal and bgvs - sounded cool to me.

Hey Douglas, glad you like it -- thanks for listening & commenting -- Allan

 

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yes

a masterpece

abull, i had a dream about you

thanks for the experience

right it

write it

 

in your opinion, what matters?

 

imknotworthy

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The song itself is very catchy.  And your vocals are spot on.  My only nit is that your guitars are out of tune a bit, which is distracting and takes away from the true beauty of the tune.  But, as you say, it's a demo.  If you take it further I'm sure you'll tighten that up.

🙂John B

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Great song. Good lyrics. Liked it a lot. But I sense somethings wrong with it, without being able to put my finger on it. Some how sound slightly out of tune/harmony throughout. Maybe it is what Johnbee58 points to, I can't tell.

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On 3/24/2019 at 6:30 PM, freddy j said:

What a great tune!!!  The melody really pulls one in to the song and your vocal performance is excellent, as are the BGV's.

Excellent song Allan!

Thanks Freddy glad you like it -- thanks for listening & commenting  -- Allan

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Nice tune. The mix sounds nice and clear to me as well.  Good job. 

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On 3/25/2019 at 7:47 PM, Jesse Screed said:

yes

a masterpece

abull, i had a dream about you

thanks for the experience

right it

write it

 

in your opinion, what matters?

 

imknotworthy

Write on Jesse.

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On 3/30/2019 at 11:14 AM, amiller said:

Nicely done.  I really like the strong melody and vocals.👏

Thanks much -- Allan

 

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