ABull 69 Posted March 23, 2019 (edited) ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Edited April 14, 2019 by ABull Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Douglas Kirby 416 Posted March 24, 2019 That was a catchy tune - I liked it. That lead guitar tone was unusual, and it worked well. The chorus was a good hook. The mix sounded good to me. Good lead vocal and bgvs - sounded cool to me. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
freddy j 320 Posted March 24, 2019 What a great tune!!! The melody really pulls one in to the song and your vocal performance is excellent, as are the BGV's. Excellent song Allan! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ABull 69 Posted March 25, 2019 On 3/24/2019 at 9:23 AM, Douglas Kirby said: That was a catchy tune - I liked it. That lead guitar tone was unusual, and it worked well. The chorus was a good hook. The mix sounded good to me. Good lead vocal and bgvs - sounded cool to me. Hey Douglas, glad you like it -- thanks for listening & commenting -- Allan Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jesse Screed 268 Posted March 25, 2019 yes a masterpece abull, i had a dream about you thanks for the experience right it write it in your opinion, what matters? imknotworthy Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
amiller 186 Posted March 30, 2019 Nicely done. I really like the strong melody and vocals.👏 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Johnbee58 208 Posted March 31, 2019 The song itself is very catchy. And your vocals are spot on. My only nit is that your guitars are out of tune a bit, which is distracting and takes away from the true beauty of the tune. But, as you say, it's a demo. If you take it further I'm sure you'll tighten that up. 🙂John B Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
iRelevant 6 Posted March 31, 2019 Great song. Good lyrics. Liked it a lot. But I sense somethings wrong with it, without being able to put my finger on it. Some how sound slightly out of tune/harmony throughout. Maybe it is what Johnbee58 points to, I can't tell. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ABull 69 Posted April 1, 2019 (edited) On 3/24/2019 at 6:30 PM, freddy j said: What a great tune!!! The melody really pulls one in to the song and your vocal performance is excellent, as are the BGV's. Excellent song Allan! Thanks Freddy glad you like it -- thanks for listening & commenting -- Allan Edited April 1, 2019 by ABull Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ed D 12 Posted April 2, 2019 Nice tune. The mix sounds nice and clear to me as well. Good job. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ABull 69 Posted April 3, 2019 On 3/25/2019 at 7:47 PM, Jesse Screed said: yes a masterpece abull, i had a dream about you thanks for the experience right it write it in your opinion, what matters? imknotworthy Write on Jesse. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ABull 69 Posted April 6, 2019 On 3/30/2019 at 11:14 AM, amiller said: Nicely done. I really like the strong melody and vocals.👏 Thanks much -- Allan Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
thegaltieribrothers 162 Posted April 7, 2019 Hi ABull, Great song + performance like sourmix candy for the ears - in a good way. Thanks for sharing. Good Job! regards paul Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
