Makke 96 Posted January 16 Nice rock song and sounds. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Johnbee58 229 Posted January 17 Interesting music, lyrics and mix. I honestly don't know which was more bizarre in 2020-The virus or the election (USA). 🤨 😀John B Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Boomin36Beatz 43 Posted January 18 the song is really wierd but it entertained me. 😂 All the Best D.B.B Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
emeraldsoul 1,139 Posted January 18 It's quirky and I wanted to hate it but . . . I just couldn't. It's simple, yet inventive. Mixwise you might look at how much the organ patch is masking the vocal. I couldn't hear all the lyrics - you might selectively drop volume on the organ patch when you have lyrics. Your organ is panned which also moves the listening target away from the vocal? I dunno. The organ might sit better in the mix if it has a fixed pan position and it wouldn't mask the vocal as much? Your reverb on the vocal is returning maybe more high end than it could, it makes the vocal a bit ringy. My .02 cents, probably all just fake news, so nevermind. cheers, -Tom 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bajan Blue 461 Posted January 19 elements of this remind me of some other track / tracks but for the life of me i cant think what!!! So it must be good...my only comment might be that it sounds as if you could up the tempo a bit, certainly in some of the sections - have you tried that? When I have written something and sometimes I'm not sure of what tempo it should be in (or what key come to that) I use Decoda by Zplane - great piece of software. You can drop your demo into the software, then change BPM / Key at will!! Cheers Nigel 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jack c. 111 Posted January 19 thanks for the song.lou reed. bring up voice.nice recording job.jack c. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bapu 2,391 Posted January 19 10 hours ago, Bajan Blue said: elements of this remind me of some other track / tracks but for the life of me i cant think what!!! BOC's Godzilla? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeeringAmps 857 Posted January 22 On 1/18/2021 at 1:22 PM, emeraldsoul said: I couldn't hear all the lyrics Good comments/suggestions from -Tom t Like the guitar tone on that walking up riff Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
