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Interesting music, lyrics and mix.  I honestly don't know which was more bizarre in 2020-The virus or the election (USA).  🤨

😀John B

 

 

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It's quirky and I wanted to hate it but . . . I just couldn't. It's simple, yet inventive.

Mixwise you might look at how much the organ patch is masking the vocal. I couldn't hear all the lyrics - you might selectively drop volume on the organ patch when you have lyrics. Your organ is panned which also moves the listening target away from the vocal? I dunno. The organ might sit better in the mix if it has a fixed pan position and it wouldn't mask the vocal as much? Your reverb on the vocal is returning maybe more high end than it could, it makes the vocal a bit ringy.

My .02 cents, probably all just fake news, so nevermind.

 

cheers,

-Tom

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elements of this remind me of some other track / tracks but for the life of me i cant think what!!!

So it must be good...my only comment might be that it sounds as if you could up the tempo a bit, certainly in some of the sections - have you tried that?

When I have written something and sometimes I'm not sure of what tempo it should be  in (or what key come to that) I use Decoda by Zplane - great piece of software.

You can drop your demo into the software, then change BPM / Key at will!!

Cheers

Nigel

 

 

 

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10 hours ago, Bajan Blue said:

elements of this remind me of some other track / tracks but for the life of me i cant think what!!!

BOC's Godzilla?

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On 1/18/2021 at 1:22 PM, emeraldsoul said:

I couldn't hear all the lyrics

Good comments/suggestions from -Tom

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Like the guitar tone on that walking up riff

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