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Your thoughts on my joining the song to a story

ARE WE LOVERS ANYMORE  (VID #1)

I feel your warmth within sheets

And smell your perfume in the air

But we don't lay like we used to

Are we lovers anymore?

 

I bring you flowers in the morning

You send your smiles on the wind

But you don't laugh like you used to

Are we lovers anymore

 

I spend each hour thinking of you

I wonder what your doing now

I've tried so hard to ask this question

Are we lovers anymore

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The world I live in feels so lonely

'Cause it's slowly broke my heart

I'd move the heavens and the earth to find the answer

Why we ain't lovers anymore

 

I feel your warmth within these sheets

I smell your perfume on the air

But we don't make love like we used to

No, we ain't lovers anymore

Oh, we ain't lovers anymore

Oh, we ain't lovers anymore ...Insert other media

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11 hours ago, Lynn said:

Great, you put a video to one of my favorite songs!  I've listened to this quite a bit, and plan to continue.

It's 'cause of your comment Lynn so when it goes viral your to blame LOL😉

ATB

Steve

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First off - I liked your vocal - fit the song well.  The song is good - nice ballad. The mix sounded good to my ears.

Nice job on the lyrics - I enjoyed the listen.

Once crit - it ends too abruptly - it needed a longer fade.

Thanks for posting.

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3 hours ago, Douglas Kirby said:

First off - I liked your vocal - fit the song well.  The song is good - nice ballad. The mix sounded good to my ears.

Nice job on the lyrics - I enjoyed the listen.

Once crit - it ends too abruptly - it needed a longer fade.

Thanks for posting.

Thanks for listening ... again (Feb 24), as you know I posted this as just a song which has the longer ending but then in doing the YT video I cut the fad shorter ... good obs on your part, maybe I should have left it as the longer version. You can still hear the 'song only' further on down the hit list.😥

ATB

Steve

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Steve
A video or a slide show can make a song more engaging but I think this song works better by itself. A video would need to be more of a story with the same couple beginning to end. Just my opinion as always.

Lovely song though! I think you're going to corner the sad and wistful song market very soon now.  😁

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I remember my reaction to this song when you posted it without the video.  This beautiful song really captured me.  There was nothing about it that I didn't like -- vocals, instrumentation, lyrics, mix, etc.  The video really enhances visually a beautiful aural work!!!!

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On 3/24/2019 at 5:45 PM, bjornpdx said:

Steve
A video or a slide show can make a song more engaging but I think this song works better by itself. A video would need to be more of a story with the same couple beginning to end. Just my opinion as always.

Lovely song though! I think you're going to corner the sad and wistful song market very soon now.  😁

You are of course right ... and I would love to get a couple of actors to do this (I asked the wife ... tin hat attached ... and I left her as quick as poss !) but just too expensive so I came up with thiso.O You opinion is extremely important and I do agree ..but we all struggle with our dreams ...

 

All the best

Steve

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