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Time machine - my first effort.


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Hi all.  Some critique requested here please.  My first effort at a solo track.  "Time machine" - a simple, acoustic love song.  With a bit of science fiction.  Any comments welcome.  (I'm not used to singing lead, so vocals are not perfect!).

Cheers.

https://www.bandlab.com/smashing_galaxy/time-machine-060bfae9?revId=77f67042-a933-eb11-9fb4-501ac5b31de6

 

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I wouldn't dare comment on a mix critically with cheap earbuds on, so I won't go there. I will say what I heard was very nice even on my mediocre buds.

The vocals and guitar have that nice down home feel to them. Nice blend is happening. The backup vox especially nice. I thought of the mix as down home refined. 

Thanks for sharing.

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On 12/15/2020 at 10:59 AM, Wookiee said:

Touch of early Simon and Garfunkel. 

I definitely agree with Wookie on the above - that was my first thought. Home run on the mix for me - sound great on my Sony MDR-7506 cans - what a terrific song and such creative lyrics; you should be very proud of that. Top work. Andy

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