ABull 83 Posted September 26, 2020 (edited) was written (music & lyrics) & performed (vocals, electric & acoustic guitars, bass guitar, keyboards, etc.) by me – home studio -- no autotune, melodyne and the like.. © Edited October 17, 2020 by ABull Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ABull 83 Posted September 28, 2020 (edited) oh yeah...a sad bump... Edited September 28, 2020 by ABull 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Douglas Kirby 505 Posted September 29, 2020 That's a cool song Allan - I enjoyed the listen and I thought the mix worked quite well. I liked those background vocals. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hugh Mann 7 Posted September 29, 2020 That was really good. Classic songwriter driven kind of song. Cant say I agree with the lyrics, but its much better, and way more creative, then a Facebook rant, lol. Very talented. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeeringAmps 768 Posted September 30, 2020 Kind of an upbeat "poppy" soundtrack to depressing subject matter; a sign of the times, that... your demo is fine musically, but are we? t 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
treesha 59 Posted October 3, 2020 Good song, well balanced mix, all the elements work well together. I like the guitar lead and the backing vocals panning. Only thing I think could be a slight bit better is the lead vocals are a little off a few times, if it was me I would melodyne them but otherwise nothing I would change. They are ok as is, but would be perfect if melodyned, you have a good voice! 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
freddy j 351 Posted October 3, 2020 I really like this song. It has a very pop and cheery sound with some very poignant lyrics (they match the times). The vocal and BGV's were very good as was that lead guitar that came in toward the end. Nice one indeed!!! 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bajan Blue 392 Posted October 4, 2020 Like this - and lyrics to match the times..perhaps!!! Good mix although have to say if it were me I would want to beef up the drums and bass a bit - just a personal choice! Good job Nigel 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
thegaltieribrothers 173 Posted October 4, 2020 Hi ABull, Great idea for a song 'World War Me', ideally highlighting people's self obsession and at the same time super hero complexes in which they think they can change the world - or is that just me 😉 I enjoyed the track very much and liked the backing vocals especially. Thanks for sharing, Good Job! regards paul 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jesse Screed 304 Posted October 4, 2020 I like the changes you made. The funny thing is, some people find war to be invigorating. Nepalm in the morning anyone? love the screaming guitar always good stuff 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ABull 83 Posted October 11, 2020 On 10/3/2020 at 10:36 AM, freddy j said: I really like this song. It has a very pop and cheery sound with some very poignant lyrics (they match the times). The vocal and BGV's were very good as was that lead guitar that came in toward the end. Nice one indeed!!! I'm glad you like the tune Freddy -- thanks for commenting.~~Allan. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
