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Hi fellow Cakewalkians,

My foolish attempt at a disco song will at least give you something to smile about on this wonderful day in history that Will Smith freed us from martian tyranny.

Any comments or critiques on everybody loves to dance would be greatly appreciated.

Happy Independence Day!

regards

paul

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Hi Paul

Vocals are good but the drums are so top end on my system they sort of get in the way a bit

Otherwise fun tune

Nigel

 

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Feels like way too much compression on the drums and maybe too much verb on the vocals.

 

Nice arrangement and writing though. Catchy chorus.

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I like the upbeat feel of the song and the positive lyrics. Much needed nowadays.
A couple of nits. There's a bit too much reverb on the voc and I think disco needs more thumping bass drum.

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This is a nice tune . To me the vox reverb is a subjective thing. The reverb gives it a more retro feel or vibe IMHO than a drier reverb would. For disco this is a little tame to my ears. Very nice work! 

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Hi Nigel,

Thanks for coming back and listening again, I'll have a look at the drums.

Hi Ed,

Thanks for your comments and listening, I will check my compression and reverb settings on my next pass.

Hi Bjorn,

I thought something more uplifting in this time of being released from the coronavirus. Thanks for your comments and listening.

Hi Starise,

A 'tame' disco - you've obviously seen me dance 😉 

Thank you all for listening and commenting it is greatly appreciated.

regards

paul

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Hi Folks,

Now revised with less compression on drums + reverb on vocal as I was a little heavy-handed with the salt 😉 

Thanks for the advice as sometimes it's a woods for the trees scenario.

regards

paul

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Groovy!  Great job on the vocals ..  I believe you captured the groove of pre disco.    I would try and speed it up 1 or 2 bpm , a little can go a long way ..   ms

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Bit of a "shaky" start (the link, not the tune).
Missed the original mix, but I'll agree with the consensus on the final mix.

👍

t

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I like this song, and it has great potential.  I think if you punch up the kick drum, it will be closer to what you may be going for.  You could also add some percussion that's in cut time to make it seem faster.  However it goes, congratulations on stretching your writing abilities and going for something different!

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Posted (edited)

Are you two really brothers?  I liked this  it was laid back dance music.  Not frenetic per the usual dance stuff.

Edited by David Sprouse
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Hi Tom,

Thanks for the listen and commenting.

Hi Daryl,

Glad you like the hook, I'll try the tempo change next time.

Hi Lynn,

Thanks for listening and for the kick drum and percussion ideas, Bjorn also mention the kick drum so I'll have a look at that then as well.

Hi David,

No we are not really brothers the name 'the Galtieri Brothers' is just a stage name and sounds exotic and controversial when you come from Birmingham UK. We wanted to shock with our name and awe with our songs but mostly our efforts seem to block and bore 😉 By the way it's just me now as my 'brother' has gone on to better things.

Thank you all for taking the time to listen and comment it is really appreciated.

regards

paul 

 

 

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I really liked this one guys - the vocals and bgvs were excellent. This had a bit of a psychedlic vibe to it, IMO.

Cool mix - nice job.

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Hey Paul, this is a nice song -- catchy -- and a good demo of it but this ain't no dance song -- :)~~Allan

 

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Hi Douglas,

Thanks for the comments and for listening.

Hi Allan,

You ain't seen what I dance to 😉.

Thank you both for the comments and for listening it is greatly appreciated.

regards

paul

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