illerill Posted February 28, 2020 Share Posted February 28, 2020 Hey guys, Picking up music again after almost 5 years offs. It has always been an emotional rollercoaster. Anyway, before recording I wanted to make sure everything is as it should textwise. English is not my mother tounge and I have experience with noticing grammatical errors etc after song is recorded, mixed and master which I would like to avoid this time around. So here's a piece I was planning to record this weekend; Wash away Verse 1. It was a good time, it was a good life I had it all planned, never would I Fall and flee, had it all in reach (see) I was the king I, not an obstacle Not a thing I, was unstoppable All was great, now all has changed Intro to chorus. Cuz I don't know, where I should go All I know is this feeling I seem okay, but I'm not great Every day oh, I'm dreamingChorus. I just wanna be clear I don't wanna be here I don't wanna feel fear I just wanna see hear Touch the waves Pain, pain wash away (x2)Verse 2. Been a long search, on a brief trip Taken wrong turns, often beefing With myself, tell me is this my hell? (so) Many dumb words, some are unheard I've been told I'm, not a songbird I've believed, this evil guy in me Intro to chorus. Now I don't know, where I should go All I know is this feeling I seem okay, but I'm not great Every day oh, I'm dreaming Chorus. I just wanna be clear I don't wanna be here I don't wanna feel fear I just wanna see hear Touch the waves Pain, pain wash away (x2) Verse 3. Is it worthless? Or is this my shot? Such a circus, I know that I've got Much to give, the strongest lust to live (But) Is it too late? Or is it today? I start walking, on my true way Step by step so I can get som rest Intro to chorus. Cuz I do know where I should go Yet all I hold is this feeling I seem okay but I'm not great Every day oh, I'm dreaming Chorus. I just wanna be clear I don't wanna be here I don't wanna feel fear I just wanna see hear Touch the waves Pain, pain wash away (x2) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pwal³ Posted February 28, 2020 Share Posted February 28, 2020 looks fine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David Sprouse Posted February 28, 2020 Share Posted February 28, 2020 Beautiful! Can't wait to hear the SONG! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
illerill Posted February 29, 2020 Author Share Posted February 29, 2020 Thanks guys! Will keep you posted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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