daryl1968 309 Posted February 4 (edited) Hi fabulous forum folks Here's a song written by Patty Lakamp and myself with some great guitar by James Griffiths. Nits and crits welcome. Lyrics below link TMI Written by Staypress and Patty Lakamp © Copyright 2020 Featuring james Griffiths on guitar V1 Why do people tell me All their private stuff? I’ve really had enough You had an operation? You know I’ll be discreet But I don’t need specifics When I’m trying to eat PreChorus No…Don’t say it Cuz I I Can’t take it Chorus Too much information Coming at my head Awkward situation Shoulda stayed in bed Too much information Why you over-share? Too much information Cuz I don’t care V2 You’re trying to fix your love life ...and I can understand But please don’t tell me Everything you’ve planned Glad you found a girlfriend Who’s really into you But spare me the detailed Post-game review PreChorus I never Tell you All the things I do Chorus Middle bit TMI TMI If you want to get personal, I’m not your guy TMI TMI If you think I’m kidding, look me in the eye PreChorus Believe it I mean it So keep it To yourself Chorus to end Edited February 4 by daryl1968 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
garybrun 427 Posted February 4 I liked it. Reminded me of the group sound "Madness" Is it meant to sound low_bit? 1 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
bjornpdx 501 Posted February 4 Daryl "don't need specifics/when i'm trying to eat" I laughed out loud on that one. Good song. I liked it. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Johnbee58 208 Posted February 5 I can relate. I know a few people who love to throw all the gross details in my face. Where did you get those synth sounds? Are they in CbB or did you buy them? Great tune. 😀John B 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
dcumpian 89 Posted February 5 Really like the lyrics on this one...funny and they flow really well. As for the rest, another stellar Staypress production! Love the super clean mix. Dan 1 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mark skinner 210 Posted February 5 Well done ! I think this is a great song in every aspect. I especially liked the intro groove. mark 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SPAK 143 Posted February 5 How do you do it? Great song mate ... it has a serious message surrounded in humour .. might use it as a ring tone next time someone tell me about there woes ... "Oh I'll just answer this .. sorry"😒 Steve 1 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeeringAmps 625 Posted February 6 I must agree, you've done it again Daryl; thumbs up! And I can relate. My wife has a "gift"; she asks, "how are ya", and oh boy, tmi... t 1 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hidden Symmetry 705 Posted February 6 Enjoyed the tune, love the humor & production. Great job! 1 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
freddy j 318 Posted February 6 Your creativity, arrangement, mix, and especially humour has produced one terrific tune. Absoflippinlutely, loved it! 1 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Douglas Kirby 408 Posted February 7 I really thought this was a fun song - to me it had an 80's vibe - a bit new wave. Your vocal on this made me think of Herman and the Hermits. I enjoyed the lyrics and the mix sounded quite nice to my ears. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bajan Blue 276 Posted February 8 Daryl - great song and I loved the lyrics, very clever and apt as well!!! Nigel 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wookiee 727 Posted February 8 Listened elsewhere, nice tracks but by commenting I am concerned I might share TMI. 2 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
daryl1968 309 Posted February 9 On 2/4/2020 at 6:23 PM, garybrun said: I liked it. Reminded me of the group sound "Madness" Is it meant to sound low_bit? Thanks a lot Gary. I used to like a bit of Madness. Not sure what you mean about the low bit? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
amiller 186 Posted February 9 Good job...’put a smile on my face. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
emeraldsoul 904 Posted February 11 So it's not about jaw pain? Massively creative mix. Unconventional, angular chords and lyrics that slide around, start and stop, quite nicely. The mixing curveballs on the vocals kept it all flowing. I'd say it evokes a certain Wang Chung vibe in spots. As in, "What the hell ever happened to Wang Chung?!?" That Wang Chung. Thanks for the peppy number and the mix was a treat for the ears. My only crit might be the ending, which just cuts off more or less, but hey it knida works. I was expecting a bit more somethingerother on the end there. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
David Sprouse 296 Posted February 11 (edited) Listening to Wang Chung causes seizures..I heard Great song! Edited February 11 by David Sprouse 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Paul Bush 101 Posted February 11 Hi yep ,I loved the intro guitar riff it just set up the whole tone for the song, and the vocals (Ray Davies)were also good just the whole feel from the song ..nice one 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
daryl1968 309 Posted February 13 On 2/4/2020 at 8:10 PM, bjornpdx said: Daryl "don't need specifics/when i'm trying to eat" I laughed out loud on that one. Good song. I liked it. Thanks Bjorn - really appreciate it mate. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
daryl1968 309 Posted February 15 On 2/5/2020 at 11:41 AM, Johnbee58 said: I can relate. I know a few people who love to throw all the gross details in my face. Where did you get those synth sounds? Are they in CbB or did you buy them? Great tune. 😀John B Hi John. The synths are from Reason 11 (now usable as a VST) and Z3TA 2. Thanks mate Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
