Lynn Wilson

I think this is a terrific recording and song!  Though I'm not a fan of Landr, this works OK for this song.  I like things that are a little different, and this sounds just fine, as is, to my ears.  I'm looking forward to your next song!

What a pleasant surprise!  This is so different and clever that I'm in awe.  It's very professional and polished and deserving of a large audience.  A+

You've gotten good advice here on the mix, but, overall, this song has the potential to be a gem.  The lyrics are quite good, and if you make the vocal shine, this will be stellar.  Well done!

This is a nice way to start my day.  Your unpredictability is one of your greatest talents.

I love the sound of this, and especially the Iridium.  Superb production all the way!

A beautiful song sung in a lovely setting just adds to the depth of the message.  Thanks for sharing this with us!

On 2/25/2021 at 1:48 AM, Paul Bush said:

Its just the whole thing , so well put together and the vocals are so clear , in fact the whole song is just great , top production, super video , cheers

Thank you, Paul, for your time and kind words!  Cheers to you, as well!

Another classic from you!  The words made me nostalgic, so close to events that I've been through.  I really like the chord progression in this, as well as the arrangement, which is quite sophisticated and unpredictable.  All in all, very inspirational.

Everything about this is top notch!  These lyrics really speak to me, so kudos there.  Keep it up!

On 2/22/2021 at 8:24 AM, Makke said:

Great job! I liked the video and music.   Pleasant orchestration and arrangement.  Good vocals and sounds. 

Makke, thanks for taking the time to  listen and respond!  Glad  you liked it.

Just what I said about turning the vocal up.  All else is clear and well panned.

Classic!  A cut above, etc., etc.  Time for a video of you playing?

Jack, you have such a unique approach to songwriting that makes it interesting to listen to even if the mix is a little off.  In this case, my only crit is that the lead vocal could be louder so that the words can be understood better.  Overall, your voice is well recorded and clear, just not quite loud enough for my old ears.  You write interesting songs, and I can hear the time and thought that goes into each one, so let those lyrics shine!

Wow, I really like this song!  Your vocal is very strong and convincing and well performed.  This has a retro vibe, yet a modern sound.  A little less reverb would make this sound closer to the listener and more intimate, but I like reverb, so it belongs regardless.  Good songwriting!

I never get tired of hearing a Fender guitar played like this.  I might bring the background instruments up in the mix, but it works quite well, as is.  Good job, Makke!

On 2/20/2021 at 3:22 AM, emeraldsoul said:

Man, this song really hangs together well. Great vocals, and I liked the video when you had light beams shining out of your face! And the overly colorized Dr appointments, how did you do that effect? Really cool, Lynn.

Cheers,

-Tom

Hi Tom, thanks so much for your kind words!  The overly colorized f/x clips are using a stock video f/x in Vegas 12 called "unsharp mask", and the light beams are an f/x called "rays".  I fiddled with them a bit and ended up with what you see.  I have much to learn when it comes to making videos, but I hope to catch up a bit this year, as I want to make more videos.  Cheers to you!

We've come a long way since camp Granada (hello mother, hello father).  I used to live in Portland in 1986 and hung out at Apple music.  I wonder if we ever ran into each other.  Anyway, if I ever go camping again, I'll remember this!  Nice job, David.

OK, I'll pay the ransom!  The dead can dance (I've seen them).  I love the sounds and textures that you've created in this.  Another inspirational piece for synth fans like me.

This is the kind of music that I like to listen to when I've had a hard day.  It makes me want to get my acoustic out and play it, but I never get the results that I want.  Maybe all it takes is something inspirational like this.

Rex, you made Audio-Technica very happy, I suspect.  I've used the AT-4033 for years and have been very happy with it.  This song is beautiful, and sounds very pleasant over all my playback systems.  I hope that it gets the airplay that it deserves.

8 hours ago, Wookiee said:

Oh I could have sworn I had commented on this all ready.  It is very Lynn.

Wookie, thanks for your furry ears!  You may have heard this song several years ago before I made the video.  If it sounds OK on your Adams, then I'm happy.

On 2/14/2021 at 10:23 AM, mark skinner said:

 I somehow missed this song first time around. Glad you reposted it with the video. Great job!  I loved the texture in your voice , thick and powerful. I especially liked the fade out with the minimal instruments. I believe I would use that part as the main body in an entirely new song. Great job on the video I enjoyed it all ..  mark

Mark, thank you for taking the time to listen and reply.  I like your idea about using the ending for a new song.  I'll get to work on that as soon as it warms up a bit in my basement.  It's cold here in Kansas City.

On 2/14/2021 at 11:46 PM, bjornpdx said:

Lynn
Yeah, I do remember this one. The video is a bonus but I think the song really stands on its own.  Have to say the lyrics and melody really struck an emotional spot in me, so well done with that!
We all get older but we just keep on keeping on, my friend.
-Bjorn

Thanks a million, Bjorn!  Hopefully, we keep getting better along the way!  I'm just trying to keep up with the rest of you talented songwriters.

Make sure the bus f/x box is enabled in the export menu, and make sure your bus is selected, too.

On 2/10/2021 at 9:29 AM, Hidden Symmetry said:

Excellent, enjoyed both the song & the video.

Thank you so much!  I'm happy to please.

On 2/11/2021 at 4:07 AM, Boomin36Beatz said:

what should  I say ?

You've said it all.  Thank you for taking the time to listen and comment!

On 2/11/2021 at 6:40 AM, Douglas Kirby said:

Cool song and video Lynn - nicely done. I always enjoy your vocal - you have a top-notch voice.

Douglas,  this means a lot, coming from you!  Keep up your good work!

20 hours ago, DeeringAmps said:

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Tom, I hope my tongue didn't completely come through my cheek   Thank you for your time!

On 2/10/2021 at 6:38 AM, SupaReels said:

Well I think you just raised the bar ... out a sight ! Excellent work Lynn ??

Stay well

Steve 

I merely raised a glass at the bar   Thank you very much, Steve!  I was thinking of you when I made this video.

On 2/10/2021 at 7:37 AM, jack c. said:

good recording job and sounds.enjoyable.david bowie voice.jack c.

Jack, thank you for your time and nice comment, especially in regards to the DB remark.  Sometimes it's better to be lucky than good.