David Sprouse

Lyrics could stand on their own as a work of art. The vocals are a little more passionate..on T2? There's a cohesiveness to your songs that a lot of us lack here; I mean, really up there with the best.

I really like the tone of the drum. is that from ni mideast? nicely crafted piece.

Interesting beat. I had a long debate with someone whether white is a color or the absence of color. dangerous lyrics, but I love it. great instrumentation on this.

Reminds me of *the association* from the 60's. as everyone said, lyrics are stellar and I love the melody. great song!

Thank you Bjorn. I know you're really busy and it means alot.

Steve--I remixed it, the dynamics are still a little bland. I had to *pan normalize * it as I mixed it too far on the left (I think I'm going deaf in my right ear). Not perfect, but better than it was.

Wookie thanks for listening. It means alot to me when you lend me your furry ears.

Look at all the magnificent things science has done for mankind. Reminded me of being in a planetarium, great sound track

brilliant makke!

It does sound like early stones. As usual your lyrics are great. my day wouldn't be complete without some blues. thanks.

Happy words. Enjoyed your song. I like your lyrical style, lots of couplets (in a song about love).

Their songs were so epic compared to the stuff we hear today. I mean, I I'm not just an old man saying this about *the kids today*. You did a really good job on this, with all the right marks of originality here and there.

I can relate to the tendonitis story. I've have osteo arthritis and play guitar gingerly now. This is a really mature song for a 23 year old. Could have been written by John Lennon.

enjoyed it, it felt live...improvised. there were moments where the energy wasn't consistent, (as if the audio was damaged) maybe that's by design. Good one.

I liked the loose feel at the beginning Satan would love it if mankind had no rhythm.

Like your song alot. It's an innocent question your asking (or is it?).

I would echo (sorry) jack's idea of a little ambience on the lead vox. Have you studied the etymology of the phrase *o.k.?* It's interesting. Nice song you have here

Bjorn, this is incredible. Your ability to reverse engineer soundscapes, then make them your own is remarkable. You're always so musical (and sometimes humerous). Thanks for sharing.

Steve, I think I need to redo the Flute line with a breath controller. That'd make the arrangement come alive. Thank you for commenting and listening.

Oregon has some very fine pinot noir's, hope you can come and visit some time.Thanks for listening.

thank you douglas. The distortion is from the contra bassoon I think. thanks for listening and commenting. Thanks for listening Bruce. I think you hear the contra bassoon, those low notes? I'm glad somebody is still drinking even if I don't anymore. haha. thanks for the thumb's up tom, it's greatly appreciated.

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Always interesting from beginning to end. I liked the guitar/sax doubling as well, it's a unique timbre. I'm glad you got a real bassist.

Lovely sounds and images. Was that you at the end looking at the trees?

Loved this tim. very uplifting. I don't know if it's the compression streaming services use or what, but they do it to my classical pieces as well..they concentrate all the energy in the midrange. The ending was kind of abrupt haha.