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Thanks Wooks and Yep I have to agree it seems as though a promise doesn't have kudos these days when it comes to politics ..but hey! what changed .... Steve

My Grandad used to play the old ivories back in the day, especially at Christmas when the whole family would gather 'round ...this was his style. Thanks for the moment ..... and the drums ? .. leave em I say, they sound ok to my ears. Steve

Blimey! Now that's playin' boy .... great stuff .... Steve

I think your vocal suits this genre and full marks on the mix, I can't help feeling a bit short changed when you use canned midi, probably because your an old muso and I like the bumps & warts of a homemade song that's posted here and then helped to fruition ...mind you mate I use Komplete Sunburst for a lot of ideas and backing so I'm not getting up ...really 😉 Godda say I'm enjoying the 'new' stuff a lot. All the best Steve

Ya'know .... I love your stuff and this is nooo different but I feel it hasn't reached it's full potential given your thoughts... don't know what version I got but Tom's input is key to this one reaching it's deserved production ... Still loved it ,,,, but hmmm ...... 🤔 Steve

Wo Ow great song indeed ...one thing, for my ears the rhythm guitar could be brought up in the mix then brought down and widened for the lead to come in .. but that 'Harrison' type lead made be go cold, (Wish I could play like that) .....this is the type of track I listen too whenever I find it and if it goes on an album I'll be very tempted to buy this ...anyway top marks ... sounds like you really enjoyed this one ! Steve

Thanks Daryl ... your comments really do mean a lot !! 😉 Steve

We all say 'thanks for listening' and it seems a little less meaningful ,.... but still, I really appreciate your thoughts on this one esp' given your stuff .. praise indeed ! so ... (sorry for this) Thanks for listening 😁 All the best and thanks Steve

Thanks mate ... 😁 All the best to you Steve

Steady on Bob I'll be lookin' for some money soon LOL ... I bow my head and thank you for such a great review of my song ‼️ All the best Steve

Thanks for the info Tom, given your observations I'm sure I could do better with he vid, and I no idea it was 480 ..But I did it on a whim, never a good idea given that it took so long to write! Should have paid a little more attention 😏. I know I've said it before but I read your input, not only on my stuff, but on other songs with more than just interest ... You really do make a difference! So thanks mate very much appreciated .... Steve

I wish you strength to pull through, it is a heavy cross to bare ... may I join in the rest here and add my sincere condolences to you and yours.

First of all please except my sorrow at the loss of your best friend, I lost my Golden retrievers some years ago and still I look for them even now … so you never forget … and I guess that's the way things are .. To your song, I would have thought a little more reverb on the flute, so as to lay it back in the mix and then allow the piano a little more room with a bit more lower end and then introduce the other instruments with slight panning to give a wider feel to the sound. The drums seem fine here. The bass is lost towards the end of the mix and the whole thing gets a little fussy with all that's going on, I think you should step back a bit and then remix without getting too close to the reason why you wrote it. Having said that, it's a great bit of work so I wish you luck with it. The pic is unforgettable …. Steve

It's now sorted ...but thankyou for listening on the tube 👍

Thanks mate. and you don't have to steal it, I'll share it with you ...Spellcheck decided to change peers ... gives a new meaning to my song LOL Always great to hear your thinking as I know your another lyrics guy. BTW It took all of three days to get that 'Irish pipe' to sound as it does, so thanks for the like😏 All the best Steve

Looking into that ... well strange ....☹️ ......I've sorted it out !

Thanks I'll change that pronto ...and thanks for the compliment 👍

Thankyou Jesse ...my words to your heart ...............

Thanks Mate Steve

I think I've fallen from this world, and I wish I didn't care I've grown tired of listening to the lies, Of my 'so called' peers... Of my 'so called' peers I think I've fallen from this world, (Backing 'I think I've fallen') That feeds our hunger with despair, Words from politicians promise better lives But it always ends the same … finding someone else to blame Choir voices join in [And I wish that I could pray, and believe there'd be a day] When the innocents of little children's hearts Would stay with them forever Could stay with us forever Irish Pipe M8 I think I've fallen from a place, ... that could hide the sadness from your face Children grow up and go their own way Leaving family behind …..they leave us behind. I think I've fallen to a place (Backing 'I think I've fallen') ...and disappeared without a trace This world is full of ships all passing in the night ….. Vanishing from sight They're vanishing from sight …. vanishing from sight Chorus voices :- I'm disappearing …. I'm disappearing I think I'm falling …....A

I hear a story behind this, a voice over ... sorta like 'War Of The Worlds'. I especially like the attention to detail in the mix everything works in harmony .. not an easy thing .so good on you ... Steve

Unbelievable vertical curve from Simond's song to this !!! ... I'm thinking you found another band and recording studio ... The mix of instruments are something else .... Knock out production in every way ...Godd'a think you were playing us all along ....... Excellent work Gary Steve

Great vocal ... rich as chocolate sauce

I think the lyrics are spot on ... you got a way of pulling me in ...I ask 'is this the future' ? who knows ..thanks for the post Jesse, your one off Steve

Nuff said ... for me you ( as you ) ... now that's the ticket, sorry mate 🤔 Steve