Paul Bush

Wow nothing boring about this at all . lovely sound, vocals are super , great sound cheers P

Yeah i liked this a lot , a really good live feel ,  sounds like you had some fun making this ..I´m still smiling .....cheers

Always a treat to see , listen, and enjoy ..nice one

Loved this great production, subjet matter , guitar playing top ..lovely sound , sit back and relax cheers ..

Always a pleasure to hear your stuff .. faltless comes to mind and never dissapoints cheers , great compostion

Always love your chord changes ,  great vocals and subject matter , top song ..nice one..... one of the best ive heard in a long time .. 4.48 long well it seemed a lot shorter than that..a mark of a good song

Yeah i have to say a bit pink floydy and i love the floyd so thats a good thing ..good song  

Hi , I really like all the changes always keeps the listener on his toes , yeah intresting song what I would call an album track ..nice one ..

Hi Noynekker , nothing wrong with this great track,.vocals are just super the mix is fine its a great song ..has an eighties feel to it  and thats a good thing, one can always tweak what is a perfect mix and end up with the same result later on so enjoy your super song well done that man cheers P  Ps . the guitar had a great tone as well 

Sounds well good to me  ..really clear prodution , vocals are great ....nice one Keith.....

21 hours ago, treesha said:

Hi Paul,

Thanks for listening and for the feedback, glad to know you enjoyed it. Feedback is always so interesting, I like that its quirky and out there to you, made me chuckle. I am always curious when one of my songs conjures images, if you feel like sharing let me know. The lead vocal really does have nectar and another track with processing but yes they do sound dry. I need to learn more about that. Cheers back and thanks again

No no no keep thèm dry   they sound great, it just reflects the true quality of your  voice ,

Hi Treesha, yes its quirky and just sort of ``out there´´ its fresh and conjures up so many images I really like it the dry vocals ,

nice one

cheers P

Sounds fine to me, great vocals...love the drum fills .

20 hours ago, freddy j said:

Absoflilipinlutely great  pop-rocking song.  Love the lyrics and the arrangement/instrumentation sells the message.  Great vocals and love the harmonies and BGV's.

Great stuff!!!

Thats high praise comming from you Freddy thanks a lot , it means so much , its one of those song where one starts off with nothing  and with a bit of luck hits the imagination of others , I never know if its good or not  cheers paul

13 hours ago, DeeringAmps said:

Late to the party, I'll just echo the comments above.

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Nice guitar work, what's the signal chain on that; sim?

t

Hi t , thanks for the comments , do you mean what amps sims on the solo ? I used TH3  Tube nine (screamer)with a fender darkface 65, with a fender tweed cabinet, with a vahalla delay  using my cheap mexico secondhand strat , I did double track it though  I hope this answers your question as I´m not up to speed on the recording jargon. cheers once again 

Thanks chaps for all the positive feedback, Bass Is really a problem with  me as I cant really play Bass and i´m never really happy with it so I tend to and hide it and inspite of that a I do turn it up but never enough It may be due to my cheap headphones , I bought nice ones and well I just dont like them , I threw everything but the kitchen sink at this one  productionwise (creative sauce tutorials my lifes blood) I do feel this is my best production thus far ...learning by doing as they say .....great forum, great members ,always a pleasure  cheers guys...... 

Yeah you got the raw bones alright I agree with Tom though it could do with some rythum guitar 

Hi chaps , well here`s a new one , Ive been through every stage of loving it , hating it, dumping it, and plain fed up with it, that said I´m now rather happy with it as always all of your comments are welcome . cheers Paul

You wanna run before you learned how to walk,

You wanna shout before you`ve learned how to talk,

Think you can change your life with ink

Still you dont feel that your fitting in

You change, you change, for changes sake but that

dont help the emptyness inside, Re-invent, re-invent,

re-invent yourself , but you just cant hold back the tide

You paint yourself to stand out from the crowd,

Pierce your skin and you talk too loud

you can protest for unknown cause

but you still find youreslf all alone

.....chorus.....

…...Oohaaa Oohha.........

Bridge

Youre checkin out, your reflextion, nobody see´s you

No one pays you no mind, Blending in with the crowd

Feeling not so proud, Your fanatsy world breaking

down yeah

Tattoo`s are stinging , pieced skin`s a weeping

Your pride is creaking….yeah yeah yeah...

….solo....

Acoustic Break

…...ohh ahh ooh ahh ooh ahh.......

Youve backed yourself into a corner right now

Being so cool , just didnt work out

The outside world frightens you most

You walk alone feeling just like a ghost

.....chorus.....

.....outro.....

Break out from yourself

stop being someone else

stand on your own two feet

and set yourself free

Break out from yourself

stop being someone else

your not on the shelf

and set yourself free

All i can say is that I concure with all of the above , just great

Hi Lynn ,  cant pidgeon hole your stuff and thats a good thing , I went back and took another take and it was still haunting me . A great piece of work congratulations...cheers paul

Hi Mark,  lots going on there loved the left right panning  and the guitar playing was great, acoustic tones beautiful,  I didnt hear too much Bass guitar though maybe needs to be more prominent  , and yeah its crying out for some vocals ..but then I would say that wouldnt I  ?

cheers paul

Hi Whoisp , this really isnt my bag man ..but that  said i can appreciate all the hard work youve put into this , this is just so complex and dam clever , I had to go back and listen three times ... and as for the video well just super ..a great piece of work.... cheers paul

Yeah liked this one lots of cool key changes , makes the listener really work for it , Bits of Joe Jackson, and the other fella Graham parker in there for me ....loved the horns great song  ..really well crafted song

Hi Keith those backing vocals really pop  ,great song

Hi guys easy when one knows how  thanks for the info  , I was copying and pasting so the markers were also being kopied , hold right click hold and delete key cheers all