ABull

Hey, good demo of your song Douglas -- good mix and vox -- say, do you have to begin so many of your songs with a drumbeat measure as an intro?--just a thought~~Allan.

Hey, good sound on this -- catchy feel to it -- I like that bass and the growl on the vox -- good one~~Allan.

Very dramatic -- good mix -- perfect for a soundtrack -- wishing you good traction on this~~Allan.

On 8/18/2020 at 8:33 AM, Starise said:

Has that layed back country feel to it. Instrumentally straight forward and well done! Good vocal harmony.

Thanks for sharing!

Much thanks.

xxx.

On 8/18/2020 at 5:25 AM, Paul Bush said:

I loved it straight from the intro, great lyrics, well done  .top

Paul, thanks much for listening and commenting -- glad ya like those lyrics~~Allan.

On 8/18/2020 at 3:39 AM, Bajan Blue said:

Allan

Good track, definitely reminds me of the Byrds  which is a good thing!

Cool

Nigel

 

Thanks Nigel -- yeah, those Byrds were great but "good thing" was the Raiders--?~~Allan.

On 8/1/2020 at 11:24 AM, DeeringAmps said:

Autobiographical?  Or just a tune?

Enjoyed it, what more can I say?

t

 

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On 8/16/2020 at 8:18 PM, Hidden Symmetry said:

Nice track, parts of it reminded me of a cross between The Byrds & The Band.

I'm pleased that you like it and I thank you for commenting.

uh...excuse me...uh...yeah, I just wanna get there to the top of the heap...mind if I get by?...damn, did I step on you?...hmm, sorry, you okay?..almost there...thanks...whoa, the view looks sooooooooo different from here..look out below!

Hey, good demo of your song -- vox up front and lyrics are understandable -- I ask -- what more can you ask of a demo?~~Allan.

TM

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Lynn Wilson

Lynn Wilson liked your track "THAT MOUTH"Liked 13 days ago13 days ago

Hey Bill, I listened to the excerpts on your site -- an ambitious project -- it sounds good and I wish you the best with it~Allan.

Cool demo Douglas though a bit hot sometimes.

lo-fi/hi-fi/no-fi/why-fi?  (I think we just collaborated but I'm not sure...)

On 8/11/2020 at 4:58 AM, garybrun said:

Very nice.
The song seems too happy for such a sad state of affairs though.  ?

Thank you for your nice comment.~~Allan.

ACOS

On 8/9/2020 at 4:03 AM, RexRed said:

 

 

Hope you like Cakewalk peeps! 

Hey Rex, this is a very good demo of your song -- your vocals are expressive and pleasing -- the arrangement is also very good -- the mix is perfect (except the drums might come up a tad).  My only nit is the lyrics -- they fit the song as is but are somewhat predictable.  You are consistently good at what you do~~Allan.

On 8/1/2020 at 11:24 AM, DeeringAmps said:

Autobiographical?  Or just a tune?

Enjoyed it, what more can I say?

t

 

Indeed.

Very well done indeed.  This is perhaps the best -- in terms of the recording -- piece I've heard on this forum in quite a bit.   The arrangement is interesting, melodic and very well played -- the mix is terrific -- the guitar playing is solid and and the tones are tasty  -- the drummer is quite good.  My only nit is that this would have more impact and musicality with a solid bass player doing some interesting lines.   Good luck with your album.  (This should have had a lot of replies on this forum, but...)~~Allan

Sounds great -- mix is good but bass could have more volume -- oh, wait...

there's more here than meets the ear...or is there?

som

Thanks for listening Doug.

L4ANL - to be reposted.