ABull

Hey, good demo of your song -- vox up front and lyrics are understandable -- I ask -- what more can you ask of a demo?~~Allan.

TM

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Lynn Wilson

Lynn Wilson liked your track "THAT MOUTH"Liked 13 days ago13 days ago

Hey Bill, I listened to the excerpts on your site -- an ambitious project -- it sounds good and I wish you the best with it~Allan.

Cool demo Douglas though a bit hot sometimes.

lo-fi/hi-fi/no-fi/why-fi?  (I think we just collaborated but I'm not sure...)

On 8/11/2020 at 4:58 AM, garybrun said:

Very nice.
The song seems too happy for such a sad state of affairs though.  🙂

Thank you for your nice comment.~~Allan.

ACOS

On 8/9/2020 at 4:03 AM, RexRed said:

 

 

Hope you like Cakewalk peeps! 

Hey Rex, this is a very good demo of your song -- your vocals are expressive and pleasing -- the arrangement is also very good -- the mix is perfect (except the drums might come up a tad).  My only nit is the lyrics -- they fit the song as is but are somewhat predictable.  You are consistently good at what you do~~Allan.

On 8/1/2020 at 11:24 AM, DeeringAmps said:

Autobiographical?  Or just a tune?

Enjoyed it, what more can I say?

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Indeed.

Very well done indeed.  This is perhaps the best -- in terms of the recording -- piece I've heard on this forum in quite a bit.   The arrangement is interesting, melodic and very well played -- the mix is terrific -- the guitar playing is solid and and the tones are tasty  -- the drummer is quite good.  My only nit is that this would have more impact and musicality with a solid bass player doing some interesting lines.   Good luck with your album.  (This should have had a lot of replies on this forum, but...)~~Allan

Sounds great -- mix is good but bass could have more volume -- oh, wait...

there's more here than meets the ear...or is there?

som

Thanks for listening Doug.

L4ANL - to be reposted.

Hey Freddy, I'm a little taken aback by this kinder and gentler version of Freddy -- I kept expecting some lyrical zingers.  However, this was very enjoyable -- I like the way you did the hi-lo vocals -- very creative.  And, I like the slightly out of left field guitar break -- you didn't go for the obvious lines there.  Mix is clear and the arrangement is terrific--good work~~Allan.

Hey Mark, this was well done indeed-- I expected to hear Michael Franks start singing   -- beautifully played and recorded and the mix is top-notch--great work~~Allan

Quite beautiful Bats -- your slide work was poetic -- the mix was perfect -- great work~~Allan

Cool demo -- just punch up that bass a bit will ya?~~Allan

Although I listen mostly to bebop style jazz, I do appreciate it when someone creates a piece as satisfying as this -- great arrangement, playing and mix.  Kudos~~Allan

wd

Hey Douglas, very good mix on this -- clear as a bell and pleasing to hear -- I like your Squeeze-like harmonies  ("Yeah...") -- good luck with this and your album~~Allan

On 7/20/2020 at 6:15 AM, Douglas Kirby said:

I like the groove of the song - the bass really drives it along.  I like your lead vocal and the vocal harmonies on this one - nice job there.

The chorus is a good hook for the song. I really liked that wah guitar as well.

I thought the mix sounded pretty good to me - well done.

Hey Douglas, glad you like the song -- thanks for listening and commenting -- much appreciated~~Allan

Great sound on this tune Mark -- country radio would do well to play this~~Allan

Hey Harry, this is a cool track -- like the guitar tone -- and the mix is very good~~Allan

Otherwise, the song is actually generic.