ABull

On 12/12/2021 at 9:13 AM, Wookiee said:

Your brain appears to be no more broken than the rest of us here and out there trying to make music.

Mix sounds Ok here for a demo.

bump

Other posters have remarked on the specifics of how this demo might be improved (and hey, we can all use advice on how to do that, right?) so...I'll just say that this is another good example of your creativity Freddy -- you come up with some new angles and ways of seeing things.  And, you find new ways of arranging blues motifs so now you have a big catalog of some very good songs in that genre.  Bravo to you, mate  -- Allan. 

MERRY CHRISTMAS!

On 12/17/2021 at 11:04 AM, freddy j said:

You had me from the first few notes of this song.  It is a very catchy song; well performed; and the mix sounds great.  Very nice!

Mr. Freddy, thank YOU for your nice comments -- I'm sorry I missed your recent song -- I'll get right to it! -- Allan.

On 12/17/2021 at 8:16 AM, Douglas Kirby said:

I liked this one Allan - nicely done.  I thought you featured your vocal quite well in this one.  The mix sounded fine to me - I liked that piano and guitar solo section.

Hey mate, thanks for mentioning that "instr." section -- glad you appreciated that -- Allan.

On 12/15/2021 at 6:48 AM, thegaltieribrothers said:

Hi Allan,

Great song + very well mixed and produced.

Brings back memories.

Thanks for sharing.

Good Job!

regards

paul

Hi Paul, I appreciate those kind words -- thanks for taking the time to listen/comment -- Allan.

On 12/14/2021 at 8:25 PM, treesha said:

Well done and fun, especially enjoyed the variety in the vocals and the guitar playing. Was trying to decipher the things you don't use ha think I got one  

Hi Treesha, well I wouldn't call it a "fun" song but I'm glad you like it  -- thanks -- Allan.

On 12/14/2021 at 3:53 PM, antler said:

Hi Allan. Great song - love the contrast in texture (playing style and panning) between the verse and chorus.

Thanks for listening and taking the time to comment -- I'm glad you like what you heard -- Allan.

On 12/14/2021 at 2:33 PM, Tim Smith said:

Well done. I liked the way you panned in time to the words. Harmonies are excellent and fit well.Clean mix. Good balance. ?

Hey Tim, thanks for those comments -- in particular, re: the vocals -- much appreciated -- Allan.

On 12/14/2021 at 1:28 PM, Eric Parsons said:

I like it!  Really dig the chorus vocals and the cool panning changes.

Very nice.

Hi Eric, so glad you like it -- yeah, I like those panning things too   -- Allan.

On 12/14/2021 at 12:11 PM, DeeringAmps said:

Nice clean mix, well written and arranged; ?'s Alan!

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good to see hear you back...

Hey Tom, thanks for stopping by and taking a listen -- and thanks for your kind comments -- Allan.

On 12/12/2021 at 12:19 PM, ramscapri said:

 

Catchy sequence, bass and dist guitar and beats there ABull, vocals stand out well... nice and well done ?

Hey thanks -- glad you like the song (and the bass guitar!)   There's no sequencing though (except for drums)  -- Allan.

Hey Tim, this is very well recorded  and it's an interesting arrangement -- everything sits well in the mix -- I like the entrance of the flute and how it meshes with the guitar sounds -- I enjoyed listening to this -- good work! -- Allan.

Very well played and recorded -- use of reverb is just right -- I enjoyed this -- Allan.

Hey Paul, I agree that it could use some editing and the timing is wonky in places but kudos for the overall good work on this -- like the melody change going into the bridge -- like the bass tones too -- a lot to like in this one -- Allan. 

Hey Douglas, another good demo of a good song -- really like the guitar tones on this and how the chorus melody/feel stands out from the verses.  Good job on this -- well recorded  -- Allan.

On 12/11/2021 at 6:04 PM, Jesse Screed said:

love the way the backing vocals and the guitar mesh as one in place

devils bag of tricks

did you play the bass too?

nice arrangement amigo

 

 

Hey Jesse, thanks for the comments -- yeah that's me on bass guitar -- glad ya like the song -- Allan.

On 12/10/2021 at 5:03 PM, KurtS said:

Good job, another catchy song, I like it.

Hey Kurt, thanks for listening -- I'm glad it caught your ear -- Allan.

MBB

On 9/15/2021 at 12:35 PM, Inthorns said:

This is a snazzy little dude, right here! Talk about some uplifting lyrics!! Way to spread the love mate   ?

Hey mate,  glad ya like the song -- don't know if it's *love* I'm spreading but it's something :) -- Allan.

On 9/14/2021 at 2:46 PM, Eric Parsons said:

This is a cool tune.  I like the little unexpected parts, makes it interesting.

Hey Eric, glad ya like the song and thanks for commenting -- Allan.

On 9/10/2021 at 7:29 PM, Johnbee58 said:

Pleasant pop tune.  Nice guitar & vocal harmony.

? John B

Glad ya like it John B -- thanks for listening and commenting -- Allan.

Hey Makke, I enjoyed this very much -- lots of good styling and such -- I think you achieved just the sounds you were going for -- good work and a good listen! -- Allan.

WGPYD

On 8/2/2021 at 3:25 PM, Douglas Kirby said:

I liked the song and the mix - you definitely have your own style.  Nicely done on the vocal. I also enjoyed the lead guitar intro and fills.

Well crafted lyrics as well.

Hey Douglas, thanks for those thoughtful comments -- glad you like the song -- :) -- Allan.