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Hey Freddy, I'm a little taken aback by this kinder and gentler version of Freddy -- I kept expecting some lyrical zingers.  However, this was very enjoyable -- I like the way you did the hi-lo vocals -- very creative.  And, I like the slightly out of left field guitar break -- you didn't go for the obvious lines there.  Mix is clear and the arrangement is terrific--good work~~Allan.

Hey Mark, this was well done indeed-- I expected to hear Michael Franks start singing   -- beautifully played and recorded and the mix is top-notch--great work~~Allan

Quite beautiful Bats -- your slide work was poetic -- the mix was perfect -- great work~~Allan

Cool demo -- just punch up that bass a bit will ya?~~Allan

Although I listen mostly to bebop style jazz, I do appreciate it when someone creates a piece as satisfying as this -- great arrangement, playing and mix.  Kudos~~Allan

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Hey Douglas, very good mix on this -- clear as a bell and pleasing to hear -- I like your Squeeze-like harmonies  ("Yeah...") -- good luck with this and your album~~Allan

On 7/20/2020 at 6:15 AM, Douglas Kirby said:

I like the groove of the song - the bass really drives it along.  I like your lead vocal and the vocal harmonies on this one - nice job there.

The chorus is a good hook for the song. I really liked that wah guitar as well.

I thought the mix sounded pretty good to me - well done.

Hey Douglas, glad you like the song -- thanks for listening and commenting -- much appreciated~~Allan

Great sound on this tune Mark -- country radio would do well to play this~~Allan

Hey Harry, this is a cool track -- like the guitar tone -- and the mix is very good~~Allan

Otherwise, the song is actually generic.

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Hey man, love that guitar tone (are you a Rory Gallagher fan?) -- very nicely played  -- the overall mix and sound is very good -- spot-on vox -- thanks for making my toes tap~~Allan

Hey Paul -- you've got a terrific voice -- I like your phrasing and the sound of your voice.  The arrangement got better as the song progressed -- like that tag a lot.  This is a very good demo of a very good pop song -- nice work!~~Allan

I'd like to hear your song -- do you have a link instead of a download?

Very nice demo of your song -- mix and arrangement are top notch -- I hear a touch of Waylon in your voice which is very appealing -- good work~~Allan

Hey Douglas, wow those drums are crackin' in that intro - reverb sounds great -- but then during the song they lose some of the punch.  To me, it sounds like the heavy use of reverb throughout the mix is making the overall sound a bit mushy.  I like your sneering vox and the chord changes from verse to chorus.  Oh, that rhyme of "annoyed" and "toy"  -- good one.~~Allan

Hey Paul, this is a nice song -- catchy -- and a good demo of it but this ain't no dance song -- :)~~Allan

quite dedly and quite Jesse...

Hey Rex, another terrific demo from you - the mix is very good -- I like your acoustic guitar playing: the rhythm is slightly unusual -- and, your vocal is spot-on:  a warm resonate sound coupled with good phrasing.  Good work~~Allan

Hey Douglas -- this is a good demo of your song -- vocal is riding the mix just right -- maybe drums could go up a tad tho--nice work~~Allan

Hey Rex, this is a terrific demo of your song -- vocal is very good as is the mix -- cool title too :)  I enjoyed this.

~~Allan

Very nice listen -- good arrangement -- thanks for sharing.~~Allan

Hey Freddy -- this is another cool number -- I like those guitars cos they sound swampy -- and bless your heart for not rhyming Sally with Alley :)

~~Allan

On 2/24/2020 at 4:37 PM, Douglas Kirby said:

I should have know it was an sm57 - there's a reason it's been around forever?

Yeah, and they last a long time -- I've had mine for years and it gets a lot of use -- and oh yeah, I use the mic a lot too~~Allan.

On 2/29/2020 at 10:24 PM, Starise said:

I enjoyed the retro sound this has. Even though it has a 60's Beatles vibe to it I pick up clearly on the individuality in it as well. The mix is subjective and i might have done a few thing you did differently. I will let it at that because one isn't better than the other in this case. That 60's music wasn't made the same as modern music.

Hey, I'm glad you like the song -- thanks for listening & commenting~~Allan.