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Hey, very modern sound -- everything sounds great -- hope you get some traction with it! -- - Allan.
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On 12/2/2023 at 8:43 AM, Supa Reels said:
I REALLY love this track, and I get that it needs to be thin to achieve the overall feel ... For what it's worth 'well done' .. works for me 👍
Only nit is the endings cut too sharp ... needs just a few millisecs more space ..
Steve
Hey, Steve, glad you like the demo -- thin guitar and all...:) -- Allan.
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On 11/26/2023 at 10:29 AM, Bajan Blue said:
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Nice track, enjoyed the listen - just thought the lead Guitar sounded a little "thin", apart from that all good
Cheers
Nigel
Hey Nigel, thanks for listening & commenting -- yeah, that thin sound is an integral ingredient of my special demo sauce -- Allan.
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On 7/28/2023 at 4:46 AM, Bajan Blue said:
Hi Andy
Great track, love the chorus especially.
Well played and sung, and the mix sounds good to me
Very cool stuff
Nigel
Thanks Nigel -
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On 7/26/2023 at 7:00 PM, Larry T. said:
Good demo, good song. Good lead & bg vox. Nice foundation of the production. I'd see about carving some low end and low-midrange off. And turn up the slide guitar (pedal steel????) in the instrumental outro. Was hoping for an instrumental middle section but that's just me🎶🎶🎶🎶
Hey Larry - thanks for listening & for those comments on my demo - yeah we could all use a carver of tones-- right? -- -- Allan.
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Hey Freddy, a little bit - just a little - out of your usual wheelhouse -- another corker I'd say -- but those drums need some work mate -- -- Allan.
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Hey Paul -- very nice -- esp. when it gets to the doo-wahs and the bridge -- some clever chord changes there. It does seem that the song really gets going from the bridge on -- maybe try to connect the verses before that better music-wise? The mix and arrangement are pleasing as are the vocals. Catchy song - - Allan.
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Hey Freddy, this is a different type of song from you, I think (haven't heard them all) -- the recording needs some work (eq and stereo separation come to mind) but the demo gets the song across as demos are usually want to do, right? I like the melody on this and the guitars are good -- your vocal sounds a bit different too -- I like it! :) Allan.
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On 11/17/2022 at 1:51 AM, AndyB01 said:
Some nice lyrical craft in there Allan - I enjoyed it (including the cheesy synths), great job!
Andy
Thnx Andy.
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On 11/10/2022 at 3:29 PM, Paul Bush said:
Nice one Alan i always get the feeling there´s a portion of tongue in cheek within your lyrics another great song cheers P
Hi Paul thanks for listening & commenting -- appreciate it - Allan.
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I don't hear 'epic' but it was well recorded and arranged. The choir sounds don't do the piece any favors -- perhaps you could use them sparingly and not bring them in so soon. It's good to challenge yourself and I wish you well in your work -- Allan.
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On 11/9/2022 at 10:14 AM, Bajan Blue said:
nothing wrong with cheesy synths - in fact the cheesier the better for me - evoke a bit of that late 70's vibe!!
Cool stuff
Nigel
Thanks Nigel.
On 11/9/2022 at 10:46 PM, Byron Dickens said:Very '70s sounding indeed.
Hey Byron, very descriptive comment -- thanks.
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Hey Freddie, wow, for a minute there I thought you were gonna do Richard and I thought man, Freddie's got a pair to attempt that. BUT, your cover of Everly's version is great -- your vocals are spot-on as is the feel of this -- everything is just right and a toe-tapper. I enjoyed this a lot -- good work! -- Allan.
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NTA (IKT)
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WTW
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Hey, this is well recorded -- very clear mix -- Allan.
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Hey Rex, very good demo of a very sweet song -- the clarinet? could do without but hey... -- Allan.
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On 10/12/2022 at 3:18 PM, freddy j said:
You never disappoint! You have a great talent for performing and producing "catchy" fun pop-ish songs. These are the kind of songs that you carry around in your head for the rest of the day after listening to them. Really good work Allan!!!
Thanks Freddy -- glad you like the song :) -- Allan.
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Very nice Nigel -- no crits from me -- good stuff - Allan.
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On 9/24/2022 at 4:43 PM, Paul Bush said:
Hi Alan, another great one, I always look forward to your songs I really loved the lyrics and the super chorus you have an ear for melody thats for sure , I feel it could do with tightening up( i should talk) with a bit of added punch , and a tad warmer sound but thats just my taste all in all a super demo cheers paul
Much thanks Paul :) - Allan
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Hey, this sounds very well put together -- the mix is good as are the performances. Only nit is that to me it sounds a bit too bright and the mix could use a bit of breathing room -- good work -- Allan.