kloon

6 hours ago, batsbrew said:

hey kloon!

thanks for the feedback, and by the way, what GENRE is this? i haven't a clue

I would call it "Rock" with hints of progressive rock and psychedelic rock.

I really liked this song, great flow! 👍

Everything sounded great to my ears and well mixed for the genre.

Great song Lynn. At first i was a bit distracted by the panning of L guitar/ R organ but i kinda like it. 👍 Gives the song an experimental touch.

It's a beautiful song and arrangement Bjorn. But the Euroasian vocals doesnt really feel in sync to my ears with the music. But dont take my word for it, it could be that im not getting the flow of it. Great work none the less.

Great tune Beagle.

My "ninja ears" catch up quite a bit of sibilance in my left ear during the chorus, especially when s's aren't 100% in line when you're doing harmonies.

Maybe a bit more reverb on the vox other than that, it sounded great! 👍

Yeah this is some Rick Wakeman stuff! Good job! 👍

8 hours ago, Joad said:

that came right into my mind as well, something right off of Blue Sky Mining. Awesome groove.

Listening to that album right now and i can definately see the similarities. Im humbled by the comparison, thank you very much joad! ♥️

A well performed cover indeed. Good job Mark!

Great song, great lyrics, great video.  Good work! 👍

Great tune Douglas, nice spacey guitars and great vocals.

7 hours ago, Douglas Kirby said:

I enjoyed the song - especially following along with the lyrics.  The mix sounded pretty good to my ears.

Thank you very much Douglas! ♥️

4 hours ago, bjornpdx said:

kloon
Boy I really like the overall sound of the song (which isn't too descriptive but I can't find a better way to put it).  The lyrics are pretty general which does make the listener interpret the meaning in a personal way. I suppose the lyrics could be accused of being overused or cliched, but to me a cliche is a good way to express something concisely since everyone knows (for example) what "barking up a wrong tree" means.
Nice work!

 

Thank you very much Bjorn! ♥️

Nice one John, enjoyed reading the lyrics while listening.

2 hours ago, Lynn said:

I love the way this song evolves over time, yet keeps a common thread from beginning to end.  Your multi-layered approach really pulls me in and makes me want to listen over and over.  I think that I "grok" your lyrics because it sounds like something I would have written to myself at one time or another.  What really grabbed my attention was the thought that I was listening to one of my favorite bands, Midnight Oil, which says a lot for your production skills.  How about putting up a few more?  

Wow, thank you very much Lynn for your kind words! ♥️

A few more songs? Here are a couple of recent ones, but they are more electronic:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1U2Jlsqzzfw
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xoqhSuRyjI4
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SgR4BW2kAnU
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8FKBYPYiJMA

29 minutes ago, Johnbee58 said:

It has a nice feel to it.  Relaxing with a great message.

🙂John B.

Thank you very much! ♥️

Good song, nice and slick production. I found the intro maybe a bit too long, the vocals could have started earlier.

Im sorry but the video looks very dated with all the effects and doesnt add anything for me.

Wow, very nice tune. Great vocals. I would personally lift the vocals a bit forward.

Nice one Tom! The song is deeper than one might first think, "are you connected or are you comsumed?" is just pure brilliance.

Nice mix and i really enjoyed the instrumental part in the end, it really fitted the song well.

Well done.

Thank you very much Tom for your kind words and taking the time to listen. Really enjoyed reading your take on the song.  ♥️

Nice song Gary, congrats on finishing your first own written song!

And remember, everything doesnt have to be perfect at once. You will surely see progression over each new song you do. What im trying  to say is... Dont be afraid to call a song finnished, even if you know that it could sound better.

Wow, this was great. I would personally have the vocals a bit wetter and more "in your face", but that is no critique just personal taste.

Great tune Myriad Rocker!

Hehe, nice little bluesy tune. i can definitely relate.

Good work!

Nice little melodies kakku, liked everything excepts the cymbals in the sax-part.

Good job!

Thank you very much freddy j & Myriad Rocker, really enjoyed reading your feedback and thoughts on the song. ♥️

1 hour ago, kakku said:

Sublime

♥️

Good song SPAK! Nice groove, love the stereo width.  A good IYF presence in the vocals.

The "You always think of her" part is really strong. Thumbs up from Kloon!

Thank you very much Grem for your kind words and feedback! ♥️