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  1. 3 hours ago, Douglas Kirby said:

    I think you have a good song here - I thought the mix was excellent.  I liked your lead vocal. 

    It sounds radio-ready to me - well done.

    Thank you very much Douglas.  :)

  2. 8 hours ago, Lynn said:

    A fabulous song!  The lyrics are transcendent as is your vocal.  I'll be listening to this a few more times.

    Wow, thank you very much Lynn. :)

  3. 11 hours ago, gtrpastor said:

    Sounds kind of like U2 in parts of it. I prefer a punchier mix. I think the drums would sound good if they had a bit more umph. But the song is really solid and catchy. Good job. Thanks for posting. 

    Thank you very much. :)

  4. 1 hour ago, freddy j said:

    Well done!  It has an almost anthem like production and excellent production.  Good lyrics and a descriptive presentation of a social situation.

    Thank you very much freddy.  Appreciate you listening and your feedback. :)

  5. 3 hours ago, Paul Bush said:

    I love the production, the drum breaks,  a really wide sound  , yep it`s all there , cheers PB

    Thank you very much Paul for listening and your kind words. :)

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    Great. I think it sounds really good now RR!

    2 minor observations and a suggestion:

    2 Mouthklicks i found distracting, one at 0:19, and one Your love is the "K"ey at 1:45.

    I could be completely off but im thinking that the drums could use a tamburine on some parts to make them less static?! Just a thought. I dont know why and i cant explain but i get a tamburine feel. :)

     

  7. 12 minutes ago, Keith Wilby said:

    Thanks kloon, you're right, there is a phaser on the vocal but I was trying to add a bit of mystery and a dash of sinister-ness, but if it's missing the mark then I might try something else ... or even nothing :)

    You should definitely mix your vocals the way you want and be faithful to your own creative process. Just make sure that you dont drown / hide them in too much fx cause you´re uncomfortable with your own voice.  Your voice is great! :)

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  8. Great! Nice well written and arranged song Keith. The vocals sound a bit weird, almost like they have a phaser on them. Your vocals are great so you could try adding an additional track with a cleaner (less fx) lead vocal.

  9. Beautiful track RexRed, really like it when the strings come in. Som sounds are a bit dry to my ears, the organ in particular.

    Im not a big fan of the 100% right pan you have on one guitar, it gets a bit distracting. Great vocals!!

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