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8 hours ago, Lynn said:
A fabulous song! The lyrics are transcendent as is your vocal. I'll be listening to this a few more times.
Wow, thank you very much Lynn.
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Thank you very much guys for listening and your kind words!
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Thank mate! I wrote it.
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Updated with spotify link as well.
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First new song of 2020. Thanks for listening. 🙂
Spotify:
https://open.spotify.com/album/0vBFzHKedDEscyOHevBErm?si=obR-NEYeSBmunxfp98YmsA
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Lovely Bjorn, perfect for my morning coffee.
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Nice, very playful!
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Great well produced and arranged track Paul. Very 80s indeed.
Liked everything but the humanized piano in the intro. Almost wished the song started at 0:33.
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That was a challenging listening. Very experimental indeed.
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11 hours ago, gtrpastor said:
Sounds kind of like U2 in parts of it. I prefer a punchier mix. I think the drums would sound good if they had a bit more umph. But the song is really solid and catchy. Good job. Thanks for posting.
Thank you very much.
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Wow, great sounding track. Sounds "Radio Ready" to me.
Personally i would probably raise the volume a pinch on the vocals, but that is just a matter of personal taste.
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Can also relate to this. Nice trippy track on a serious subject freddy.
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1 hour ago, freddy j said:
Well done! It has an almost anthem like production and excellent production. Good lyrics and a descriptive presentation of a social situation.
Thank you very much freddy. Appreciate you listening and your feedback.
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3 hours ago, Paul Bush said:
I love the production, the drum breaks, a really wide sound , yep it`s all there , cheers PB
Thank you very much Paul for listening and your kind words.
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Hehe, even i was yelling "come on light" by the end of the song.
Good work Bjorn.
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Sounds "radio ready" now!
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Wow, this is great! But i do think that the non-spoken vocals are a bit low.
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Great. I think it sounds really good now RR!
2 minor observations and a suggestion:
2 Mouthklicks i found distracting, one at 0:19, and one Your love is the "K"ey at 1:45.
I could be completely off but im thinking that the drums could use a tamburine on some parts to make them less static?! Just a thought. I dont know why and i cant explain but i get a tamburine feel.
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12 minutes ago, Keith Wilby said:
Thanks kloon, you're right, there is a phaser on the vocal but I was trying to add a bit of mystery and a dash of sinister-ness, but if it's missing the mark then I might try something else ... or even nothing
You should definitely mix your vocals the way you want and be faithful to your own creative process. Just make sure that you dont drown / hide them in too much fx cause you´re uncomfortable with your own voice. Your voice is great!
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Great! Nice well written and arranged song Keith. The vocals sound a bit weird, almost like they have a phaser on them. Your vocals are great so you could try adding an additional track with a cleaner (less fx) lead vocal.
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Love the flow, you are very talanted!
Nice beard as well, been growing mine out since end of august last year so its not quite a impressive as yours yet but pretty majestic.
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Great stuff, very polished in sound and panning. Maybe a pinch more power in the drums?
Good work!
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Beautiful track RexRed, really like it when the strings come in. Som sounds are a bit dry to my ears, the organ in particular.
Im not a big fan of the 100% right pan you have on one guitar, it gets a bit distracting. Great vocals!!
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Cool track, candy for the ears.
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Thank you very much Douglas.