garybrun

I dont think I have ever heard a song about this historic lady. you told her story well. I agree with theother comments you have been given. well done.. love the "first lady of the air"

Hi Jerry. You have great composing skills. I recognized the dune sound and very clever how you integrated it with traditional orchestration. If you are looking for a vocalist for collaboration I dont mind trying to help out. You can hear my voice and various posts on here... if I can be of assistance please send a pm. well done. Gary

HI Kim. Your mix is good. I am not trying to be big headed here... but I used to be a Pioneer DJ and worked for them for a couple of years. You need to get out of the repetition (too much) and also add more dynamics and add breaks up or down. You will not keep interest or your dance floor full. But take heart... its a good start. I suggest you listen to more tracks in your genre and listen too how they arrange them. Take a pen and paper and work out their breaks and dynamics and their structure... then apply it to your own music. not forgetting that you are unique... so dont have to copy... but this style of music has a sort of rule. Wish you all the best and good luck with your creativity,.

Thanks for taking the time to listen Freddy. I have band practice tonight and will see how the BGV goes. I can hear them in my head.

Thanks for taking the time to listen and commenting Rob. Appreciated.

WOW! Thanks Lynn... great encouragement.

Thanks for taking the time to listen Oh Fury One. I understand you point... no problem. 🙂

Well done. I hear the improvements 🙂

Cheers Pal

I thought this was great. Your a lucky man!! Well done. Mix wise their are a lot of harsh frequencies for my ears.

Cheers Mark. Thanks for taking the time to listen and comment. Will post something in Norwegian soon 🙂

I thought this was brilliant Well done ... very 1960's Like the way you pan the organ and stuff. Thought the volume was a little low. I smashed it through my mastering chain.. hope ya dont mind. http://www.garybrun.com/cakewalk/Psychotic_Reaction1.wav Well done!!

Nice track and good lyrics Well done

Thanks for commenting and taking the time listen Nigel. Gary

Thanks for the comments and taking time to listen. Another practice this Thursday, A great thing about today is that you can record the songs on the mixer and use them for virtual sound checks so if one person cant make it.. you can still carry on the band practise. I have 4 weeks to pull this thing off!!

Thanks mate as always. Ive been to Tennessee about 4 times.. so maybe picked up and accent LOL. I think its just influences over the years... cant explain it.

Very nice Mark.

Good on ya for the fresh start: I recognized the style and who it was straight away. 🙂

Well done. Super CHiLL!

HI Nigel. Well done on the video. Video is my thing too... nice use of transitions and fades. Magic Bullet in some clips? Gary

The fury mitts have gotten its hands on drumsticks 🙂 Well done.

Thanks for listening Douglas. Back ground vocals is the plan 🙂 I formed a new band "Gary & The Norwegians" a few days ago... so wanted to get the track together so they can hear it. Ive got four weeks... 15hrs practice to put a concert on!!!!

Thanks so much for taking the time to listen Tom I was working on this to 4am this morning... so I will upload a new version soon. It was to get the ideas down and get other feedback. Thanks for the EXCELLENT feedback ... really appreciated, Version 2 soon.

Wasted Years I wrote when I was around 19 years old. (57 now) Some basic tuning issues with the vocal but I've uploaded as a record for later, too come back too and fix. Value your opinions so far. Thanks Gary 4/4 60BPM Chords C,F,G,D. Not so long ago I came to you With doubts troubles and fears. That’s when you opened up my eyes. I soon realized all those wasted years When I could have know you more. I remember on that day When I met you in a personal way All the new things I could see. Oh how my outlook changed My life you rearranged Such a purpose you gave to me. But I say help me Lord Please help me Lord The days seem short and the nights so long I say help me Lord Please help me Lord You know I don’t wanna do wrong That beautiful seed you’ve sown Lord I know its grown But it needs water every day from you. And that bible by my bed Not now so often read Just gathers dust on the chair. SO now I must confess My feelings of unholiness I feel I’m drifting away Seems so natural to do Too drift and hut you Such a great battle within. But I say help me Lord Please help me Lord The days seem short and the nights so long I say help me Lord Please help me Lord You know I don’t wanna do wrong When lying in my bed one day I heard a quite but still voice say My child you are so precious to me And as those tears flowed When deep inside my heat glowed. Knowing you would never turn your back on me. I want to learn to love you more Worship and adore Soak up your Spirit more each day. Thank you for making me thine Grafting me back onto the vine What more can I say? But thank you Lord I thank you Lord For all the gifts you’ve given to me Yes I thank you Lord Thank you Lord There’s a place waiting for me In eternity..

There something about ABull reminds me of the Stranglers... dont know why!