garybrun

Well done John. Ive been listening to music all day so I may be wrong. Sounds like one of your guitars has tuning issues.

Doesn't matter @daryl1968 if no one else pipes in... go for it 🙂 Im recording at 48x24bit

Is the vocal too loud?

Put the link back @Jesse Screed 🙂

Thanks for listening and excellent comments Jim. I will look at those suggestions tomorrow... just added a version recently and then saw this!! 🙂 Once again thanks a bunch!

Thanks Nigel. Vocal version now up... see Wasted Years 2 Vocals thread.

As Bjørn says good driving beat and I expected something sad 🙂 Nice synth sounds.

Sorry guys as I dont mean to hog the board. I have now redone the vocal and also sang bass vocal for backing. I dont know how to harmonize to be honest in the upper range. I started the track at a lower volume and gradually increase in each verse... maybe I have over done it?? Once again MANY MANY thanks to everyone for the help on this. I could fork it on BandLab if someone would like to have ago at backing vocals. Cheers as always, Gary

Those strings on the left are nice... Go back to my original point... I would bring the sax down a little... so the others can shine. Very nice piece of music... like it a lot.

Thats true mate... thats why I wrote it.

Thanks so much @mark skinner... thats what Im looking for... Im on it.

This second mix was a lot better. I liked the way the drums came through more... they where masked before. Well done.

Thanks so much @Sabby Brown for taking the time to listen. Im no good at harmonies and how to structure them. If anyone would like to have ago... Ill send the tracks over.

Thanks @Douglas Kirby I have just added the instrumental(backing track) as my ears where too tired yesterday and hope I have fixed the reverb problem. There was too much Sunset Studio room.. so I have removed it all together. The reverb you hear now are from UAD Capital Chambers.

HI guys/gals, Could I please have your feedback on this mix for the track. There are no vocals as Im going to redo them as I had a problem with sibulence. I have added an acoustic guitar to this version. Thanks for the comments... and please rip it to bits. Cheers, Gary

Well done Fred. Fantastic mix here on my Focals.

WOW thats a lot of lyrics 🙂 I also noticed a few clipping as those written above and agree also with the room choice. You have a great voice for this style of music.

Well done Amad.

Listened again to this on my Focals at 85db... reckon you nailed this mix 🙂 Well done-

This was really nice mate. It would be great for a documentary. A few years ago I drove in my Land Rover from Norway and spent 5 weeks crossing the dessert with my son in Morocco: This would have been perfect for the video footage.

Brilliant... Love it! More defined! 🙂

Gary Newman 🙂

Bass guitar Will take another listen I think the lead sax masks everything at the beginning (I am thinking like a vocal in a track and the sax is the vocal and could be dropped a litte) then I think the other instruments would pop.

Very nice... love the sax playing.,, and great frequency separation too. We all paint very different pictures,,, could the bass come up a little more?

Dont you dare retire from creating your stuff!! Ill come and kick you up the *****!!